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Title: TECHNICLE: The Age of Tangata
Post by: Sibo2808 on October 17, 2014, 11:14:32 pm
Please no mean comments. This is made for enjoyment. Thanks! :)

Part 1: Arriving

"Look at that beautiful island!"
24 tourists were taking a boat ride on the sea near New Zealand. The island is called Motu, and has a long story. Legend tells that epic heroes once protected the island. They also passed Mako island.
"We're stopping by Motu!"

Massive temples rules the island. The biggest of them all was Panoni, The Temple of Destiny. They walked in a big bunch. Six of them decided to go alone: Simon, ?, ?, ?, Clara & Emma. They walked went to the city of No-Motu. They saw many chambers for the heroes. They suddenly entered a hall with the name of Katoka. Six big pillars, each with a hole storing a mask, held the roof.
"What is this?" They each went to a mask. Simon went to a mask with the name "Kitea - The Mask of Water" ...

Part 2: The Wai Tangata

Each of them chose a mask. As soon as they touched the masks, an elemental storm dragged the masks from the pillars and in to the storm. The masks recreated themselves into weapons. At once the storm ended, and the weapons fell on the ground. They ran to the weapons.

TRIDENT OF WAVES & INVISIBILITY
SWORDS OF FLAMES
BLADE OF ICE
BOOMERANGS OF JUNGLE & AIR
CLAWS OF STONE
HAMMER OF EARTH

The weapons glowed in elemental powers. When they touched them, they were forever changed. They got elemental suits and powers. They became the legendary Wai. Wai Tangata. Masters of the Elements.
"What happened?" Clara asked, "I have this green suit!"
"I don't know either, but I fear that we have to fight."
They walked out of the temple realizing they're stuck on the island. From being ordinary tourists to Ko Tangata. They also got new names:

WAI NOWEI (Simon), WAI OF WATER
WAI GULA, WAI OF JUNGLE
WAI NURAKA, WAI OF ICE
[...]

Part 3: Koropa Crawlers

Suddenly the temple began shaking. They ran out. They could hear squeaking, loud squeaking. Thousands of spider-like crawlers had made their way up from the underworld. Many of them jumped pretty high. They were green and orange. In the same moment all of them were gone.
"What was that?" Nuraka stared at the temple.
They walked into the temple again. On a wall they could see drawings telling a story. The story of Wai Tangata, the only hope for Motu.

To be continued ...

Characters
* Simon (Wai Nowei), Wai of Water
*

I had to change this because of several comments.
Title: Re: BIONICLE: The Age of Tangata
Post by: NinjagoNerd36 on October 18, 2014, 01:20:17 am
Very nice! Keep writing! :D
Title: Re: BIONICLE: The Age of Tangata
Post by: Sibo2808 on October 18, 2014, 01:49:45 am
Very nice! Keep writing! :D

Yay! Thank you! I need more characters! Do you want to create one? :D

I thought that many BIONICLE fans would get mad at me :P
Title: Re: BIONICLE: The Age of Tangata
Post by: LK901 on October 18, 2014, 11:26:04 am
Very nice! Keep writing! :D

Yay! Thank you! I need more characters! Do you want to create one? :D

I thought that many BIONICLE fans would get mad at me :P
I'm not a BIONICLE fan, really.  But I will work on creating a character. 
Title: Re: BIONICLE: The Age of Tangata
Post by: Sibo2808 on October 18, 2014, 04:40:05 pm
Very nice! Keep writing! :D

Yay! Thank you! I need more characters! Do you want to create one? :D

I thought that many BIONICLE fans would get mad at me :P
I'm not a BIONICLE fan, really.  But I will work on creating a character.

Nice! I'm done with the prototype for Toa Nowei (My character :-P)! I'll also make some drawings. Nowei is the only Toa I'll be able to make with real LEGO, so LDD would be an option. If they have the parts. :-P
Title: Re: BIONICLE: The Age of Tangata
Post by: LK901 on October 18, 2014, 08:32:56 pm
Very nice! Keep writing! :D

Yay! Thank you! I need more characters! Do you want to create one? :D

I thought that many BIONICLE fans would get mad at me :P
I'm not a BIONICLE fan, really.  But I will work on creating a character.

Nice! I'm done with the prototype for Toa Nowei (My character :-P)! I'll also make some drawings. Nowei is the only Toa I'll be able to make with real LEGO, so LDD would be an option. If they have the parts. :-P
I thought I heard that LDD did have the parts.  Not sure, though.
Title: Re: BIONICLE: The Age of Tangata
Post by: Sibo2808 on October 18, 2014, 08:41:04 pm
Very nice! Keep writing! :D

Yay! Thank you! I need more characters! Do you want to create one? :D

I thought that many BIONICLE fans would get mad at me :P
I'm not a BIONICLE fan, really.  But I will work on creating a character.

Nice! I'm done with the prototype for Toa Nowei (My character :-P)! I'll also make some drawings. Nowei is the only Toa I'll be able to make with real LEGO, so LDD would be an option. If they have the parts. :-P
I thought I heard that LDD did have the parts.  Not sure, though.

Cool. I'm almost done with Nowei now. :)
I'm going to be a little busy tomorrow (15:30- 17:00 here), not the best day. It's some stuff my school's doing. :-\ :'(
Title: Re: BIONICLE: The Age of Tangata
Post by: NinjagoNerd36 on October 19, 2014, 04:06:44 am
Very nice! Keep writing! :D

Yay! Thank you! I need more characters! Do you want to create one? :D

I thought that many BIONICLE fans would get mad at me :P
Hmm, I'll make one as soon as I have time.
Title: Re: BIONICLE: The Age of Tangata
Post by: Sibo2808 on October 19, 2014, 02:45:17 pm
Very nice! Keep writing! :D

Yay! Thank you! I need more characters! Do you want to create one? :D

I thought that many BIONICLE fans would get mad at me :P
Hmm, I'll make one as soon as I have time.

Great!  ;D
Title: Re: TECHNICLE: The Age of Tangata
Post by: SiboBricks on November 29, 2014, 09:11:02 pm
As you might know and see, I was Sibo2808. :P
Just tying to get things to move the groove here :-P